You have a point, although something very good happened there, also;
namely, he hooked up with Toufuu, who gave him his life back and,
ultimately, a new and good goal for his life.
I'll consider a way to incorporate your suggestion.
Thanks,
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D.F. Roeder
http://www.flash.net/~dfroeder/index.html
-----Original Message-----
From: Chan Wei Lik <weimin@pl.jaring.my>
To: FFML (E-mail) <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Friday, October 22, 1999 12:43 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][Ranma - Tenchi] Hearts' Healing 2 - The Paths
of Honor, part 1
You need a scene or two leading up to Ranma's decision to reopen the
Nerima
Clinic. He remembers what happened there, I think he really doesn't
want to
see the Tendos again, even after 10-20 years.
Other than that, very good story.
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