from intruding.
Abruptly a series of small projectiles acted from the building.
But where they decent actors? (did you mean 'arced' perhaps?)
Nah. They sucked.
One officer, stranded right in the middle of the haze, bumped into
someone crossing the street, apparently just from the building. Before
he could open his mouth, a hand moved and permanently silenced him.
How? I think it would be better if you gave at leats a casual reference to
it.
I thought about it but I didn't want to describe it. I thought that
would be a bit more graphic than the story needed and didn't really
serve any point in the story. Besides, its a Terminator. It can drive
its hand through cement walls. I think most readers can figure out how
it could make a kill.
was gone.
The agent walked the streets, moving in the direction of the room it
had rented. It needed to store the possessions carried in the duffel bag
it carried.
Mission Objective 1: Terminate Target 1: Complete
Mission Objective 2: Terminate Target 2: Complete
Mission Objective 3: Terminate Target 3: Complete
Mission Objective 4: Terminate Target 4: Complete
Mission Objective 5: Terminate Target 5: Complete
Mission Phase 1 Success/Fail Ratio: 98%
Phase 1 Assessment: Success
Hmm. I think we've seen enough of these. They're starting to get pretty
distracting and we know how its 'mind' works.
I was going for shock value. I don't think I use any more.
Currently singing an old American tune, no one quite remembered the
name but the words "Celebrate good time, hang on!" did seem to be in
abundance, he led the festivities. After all, the Senshi were dead. The
Black Moon was gonna party like it's 1999.
Ouch
Nice group of guys, eh?
In one corner, three not-so-happy party attendees were discussing
matters of grave importance. Crack or Heroin? They eventually choose
Crack and became quite happy party goers. This has absolutely nothing to
do with anything though so never mind.
Hmm. A bit abrupt. I don't know, but the humor in it didn't really work for
me.
hmm. I used it for humor and to set the image of the party in your mind.
I could have just said "drugs were everywhere." But that really lacked
subtlety.
Pluto clutched her head again and but
bit (Perhaps?)
Yep. She's biting.
back the scream. The Time Stream
was radiating wrongness and to one as in tune with it as she was, it
caused unspeakable pain.
So we shall not speak of it here
I will.
most magically warded door in
existence closed.
A moment later, Mihoshi barged in
Sucks to be you, Pluto.
the big one though. It was looking more and more like the only way to
prevent paradox
a paradox
Not really. I'm using the word "paradox" in unusual ways. It's both a
noun and a adjective.
>from her Senshi form to her natural. One was the ability to hold her
breath for almost a week.
Heh
Yep. Its an ambitious event.
--
I'm trying to avoid pointless violence. I used it earlier to make a
point but now I'm avoiding it. Not to say there won't be violence, but
I'm trying not to add anything gratuitous.
And everything is about ready for the real action to begin. Then the fat
hits the fan.
Thanks as always.
Miashara