You wrote:
Chapter 3
The police line watched the conflict within the building with
trepidation. It had been silent for several minutes know,
now
no explosions
or flashes of magical light. A few officers were hoping the whole thing
was over. The majority doubted they were that lucky and continued to
prevent the curios
curious
from intruding.
Abruptly a series of small projectiles acted from the building.
But where they decent actors? (did you mean 'arced' perhaps?)
One officer, stranded right in the middle of the haze, bumped into
someone crossing the street, apparently just from the building. Before
he could open his mouth, a hand moved and permanently silenced him.
How? I think it would be better if you gave at leats a casual reference to
it.
in his way out. Then her
he
was gone.
The agent walked the streets, moving in the direction of the room it
had rented. It needed to store the possessions carried in the duffel bag
it carried.
Mission Objective 1: Terminate Target 1: Complete
Mission Objective 2: Terminate Target 2: Complete
Mission Objective 3: Terminate Target 3: Complete
Mission Objective 4: Terminate Target 4: Complete
Mission Objective 5: Terminate Target 5: Complete
Mission Phase 1 Success/Fail Ratio: 98%
Phase 1 Assessment: Success
Hmm. I think we've seen enough of these. They're starting to get pretty
distracting and we know how its 'mind' works.
Currently singing an old American tune, no one quite remembered the
name but the words "Celebrate good time, hang on!" did seem to be in
abundance, he led the festivities. After all, the Senshi were dead. The
Black Moon was gonna party like it's 1999.
Ouch
In one corner, three not-so-happy party attendees were discussing
matters of grave importance. Crack or Heroin? They eventually choose
Crack and became quite happy party goers. This has absolutely nothing to
do with anything though so never mind.
Hmm. A bit abrupt. I don't know, but the humor in it didn't really work for
me.
"Trust us. You DON'T want to know!" Came the dual response.
"Fine. I'll do it. When?" Pearl asked.
"Two hours from now while everyone else is either passed out or too
mellow to care." I
care,
Pluto clutched her head again and but
bit (Perhaps?)
back the scream. The Time Stream
was radiating wrongness and to one as in tune with it as she was, it
caused unspeakable pain.
So we shall not speak of it here
but in that would be much latter.
Pluto reached out gingerly and flipped a switch on her desk. Elsewhere,
a great portal swung shut and the singly
single
most magically warded door in
existence closed.
A moment later, Mihoshi barged in
Pluto breathed a sigh of relief.
She had gone off for four days, saving some new time traveler from
their own stupidity. Why was it that every super genius who invented
time travel was a moron? Or did they all just have some burning desire
to go back, meet their own parents, and start causing mayhem?
She had returned and found Onyx waiting. He had used
drop 'used'
the big one though. It was looking more and more like the only way to
prevent paradox
a paradox
entire world when I was Exiled! You aided yourself!" He was almost
screaming now. "And you expect me to come back, throw everything away,
and risk my life!?" He was screaming.
"You're loosing
losing
Regaining his mental balance, he straitened
straightened
himself. He looked down at
her, face calm but guarded.
"Three: If you do and succeed, I will have you're
your
banishment revoked.
You can return if you want, or begone and never seen
be seen
>from her Senshi form to her natural. One was the ability to hold her
breath for almost a week.
Heh
bladed knife, into his boot he brought his previous night's ponderings
back up.
Cyanide sat down and held his head. 'Damn. Damn. Damn. Damn. Damn.' It
was still there. The
drop 'the'
"So, it all comes back to that eh?" When he finally did speak, his
voice was bitter and caustic. "Fine then, I'll sere
see
"You're permanent. Have you been to Earth recently? Everything the
Senshi did ended. Everything related to them never happened. You're
different though. For some reason, you're permanent. Changes to the Time
Line don't affect you. Besides, the same things which got you exiled are
now our best chance."
"I see. I'll leave two days after your
you're
Interesting set up.
D.B. Sommer