Subject: [FFML] Collected Comments
From: David Johnston
Date: 10/20/1999, 4:02 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Subject: 
        [FFML] [FFML][Ranma - Tenchi] Hearts' Healing 2 - The Paths of Honor, part 1 
  Date: 
        Wed, 20 Oct 1999 00:05:12 -0500 
  From: 
        "D.F. Roeder" <dfroeder@flash.net>

Description:  Ranma's life having been derailed by his separation from his
father, he ends up as Tofu's adopted son, married to Ryoko from the Tenchi 
series.

Comments:  I have trouble believing that Tendo wouldn't arrange another
marriage if it seems clear that Ranma isn't going to show and the girls 
are unlikely to handle it theirselves.  As far as the Tendo family honour
is concerned, there is no problem.  It was the Saotomes who failed to present
Ranma, so the Saotome honour has been damaged but the Tendo honour remains
unharmed.  

Subject: 
        [FFML] [Fanfic][NGE][Spoiler] Ayanami wa hito ni naru - Prologue 
  Date: 
        Wed, 20 Oct 1999 06:53:10 +0100 
  From: 
        Mats Fors�n <garnax@lysator.liu.se>

Description:  Rei replaces Asuka as the designated victim of the mind 
messing angel.

Comments:  It's cute that Rei is unaffected by the childhood trauma attack.
However, I'd have to see the aftermath to decide whether I liked this.

Subject: 
        [FFML] [Ranma][Odyssey][Need title] - Chapter 1 AND [R.5/Ody][Query]Ideas?
        Prereaders? Assistant writers? 
  Date: 
        Tue, 19 Oct 1999 20:51:38 -0500 
  From: 
        "Rebeka Thomas" <ranko_1_2@hotmail.com>

Description:  Ranma is plopped into the Odyssey.

Comments:  Odysseus is perhaps just a wee bit too friendly to this stranger just 
standing around, although he probably use a replacement for the sailors eaten
by Polyphemus.  I don't see any particularly good reason why Ranma would be smart
enough to warn Odysseus not to be boastful.  The author generally manages a nice 
pastiche of Homer, but breaks the fourth wall in irritating ways.  

Subject: 
            [FFML] [FFML][RANMA 1/2] Blackadder 1/2 
       Date: 
            Tue, 19 Oct 1999 17:32:57 -0700 
       From: 
            "Trel'la" <ocelot@akron.infi.net>

Description:  Blackadder shows up in a 16th century version of Ranma 1/2.

Comments:  Kind of weak on plot.  

Subject: 
        [FFML] [Slayers] [now serious fic] A Past to be Forgotten Chapter Two: The Isle
        of Remembrance 
  Date: 
        Tue, 19 Oct 1999 18:01:46 -0700 
  From: 
        Murasaki Kaze <muteki@juno.com>

Description:  

Subject: 
        [FFML] [crossover] [BGC-alternate reality] Bubblegum Crash: Prologue 
  Date: 
        Wed, 20 Oct 1999 02:25:38 +0800 
  From: 
        "Gary Ee" <garyee@mbox4.singnet.com.sg>
    To: 
        "FFML" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Description:  In a BGC universe where all the parts have been recast,
a major character is expelled, probably into the regular BGC universe.

Comments:  Badly formatted and doesn't make a heck of a lot of sense
as written.  

Subject: 
         [FFML] [Pok�mon] POK�GENIE chapter 06 
    Date: 
         Tue, 19 Oct 1999 09:25:34 GMT 
    From: 
         "Tom Mathews a.k.a. Disruptor" <godphoniex@hotmail.com>

Description:  Kasumi grows increasingly used to her existence as a 
a human pokemon.  

Comments:  But what will the children be?  

Subject: 
        [FFML] FFML[fanfic][Ranma]LoveSpell, Chapter 5 
  Date: 
        Mon, 18 Oct 1999 12:19:20 -0700 (PDT) 
  From: 
        Anna Lvovsky <ana_chan_@yahoo.com>

Description:  Ranma begins to search for the dimensionally lost Akane, but bounces.

Comments:  Not too bad, but could do with a good deal less of Akane's introspection
which goes on at length.  The way that the houses were joined was a very clever
idea.


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