From: Rebeka Thomas
AND, just because my ideas are different then yours doesnt make them
'wrong'!!!!
Stop acting like a child. He was under no obligation to listen to your
rantings. Who he decides to use or drop as his prereaders are entirely at
his discretion. If he decides that you did not contribute enough to credit,
that's his choice too.
To Demented Otaku,
Sorry I couldn't respond previously. I've been busy with a few games. The
fic on a whole is pretty solid. Except for one thing. The paragraph where
Keiichi accepts that his sister is a goddess in his place doesn't sound
right. He's taking it remarkably in stride.
Probably just my imagination, but I think Keiichi might be envious of
Megumi's new status. This COULD lead to problems (read: exploitable
plotline) and K1 has to stay alive for the years or decades it would take
the circle to recharge.
Keep it up!