DB Sommer wrote:
You wrote:
Here we go. As always, C&C is welcome. If you should desire to flame me,
please say why I'm getting flamed. Not just "You suck."
How about, "You have smelly breath,"? Would that be all right? ^_^
Fine. Make me pop a Certs.
Chapter 2
Binary flowed across microprocessors. Threat categories were
re-evaluated and tactical plans were created, examined, and discarded,
at trillions of calculations per second. Full weapon specs were compared
to target files. An entire new plan of action was calculated.
Implementation would begin in .0000001 seconds.
The first part of the plan consisted of one line. "Get bigger guns."
Heh.
Beautiful simplicity, our Terminator.
The Senshi were in the temple Rei worked at. More specifically, the
room with the great fire. It wasn't that great right now, it was quietly
burning a few logs and waiting for the next reading.
The Senshi weren't looking that great either. They were all in their
civilian clothing, having changed out
'back' would work better, I think.
Works for me.
still a little sore but otherwise fine.
"Why did we run away?" Usagi asked.
"It beats getting perforated with bullets," Ami, the smart one in the
group, replied.
I knew she was intelligent.
"Well, there are some conflicting pieces of information. He's alive,
but he has no life sign."
"So what does that mean?" Minako asked.
"I don't know!" This really frustrated Ami.
"Do our attacks work well against him?" Makoto again.
asked again.
yep.
Matoko responded. One person would have to go
one on one for a few seconds and she had many frustrations needed to
work out. No one hurt her best friends and got away with it.
"No! He's too strong. You saw what he did when we were all together. I
won't let anyone risk themselves like that." Usagi wanted to slam that
line of speculation shut immediately. She not going to have any of her
friends do something that dangerous.
Heh. Typical Usagi.
There is a nice, easy to write, simplicity in much of Usagi's character.
"I don't know." Ami
know," Ami
closer but since it could be anywhere in the city, I can't separate it."
"But if we could get it alone in a park?" Rei asked.
"Then yes. I could probably detect it." The blue hairdo
blue-haired
Nah. You know she dies it.
girl replied.
After that the meeting continued for some time but nothing new was
decided. When they finally broke, after Rei commented they could use a
pile of food as bait because it would know anywhere there's that much
food, Usagi would be nearby,
Now that sounds like a plan.
It can't fail!
"Milord Prince! The agent! It's doing something!" Sodium exclaimed with
glee.
"What?"
"I haven't a clue!" Sodium continued in the same vein.
Oooh. He's coming close to wearing out his welcome, methinks.
We shall see. Diamond rewards results, not the intellect of he who
thought of them.
News and Information! Plushie
Toys! Full Naked Pics!" Proclaimed the billboard in bright, festive
lettering with pictures of the Senshi as a background.
'Mission necessity 8.7 through 10.3. Acquire fact on the Senshi. Target
location will provide.' It walked in.
"It went into a cheap porno and magazine store?"
Heh.
That would give me pause.
The agent walked in and approached the main desk. The secretary sitting
there looked up from her computer. "Can I help you?"
Option one: Verbally attempt to gain access to the armory. Preference
rating: 2%
Option two: Return covertly and attempt to gain access to the armory.
Preference rating: 3%
Option three: Direct assault on the installation and attempt to gain
access to the armory. Preference rating: 95.5 %
Option four through eight, negligible chance of success.
Option selection, three.
Of course. The direct approach is always the best.
After watching both Terminator movies several times for "research
purposes," I can safely say the T-101 prefers the direct approach.
'It
?
The anchorman spoke quickly. "A terrorist
attack on the National Defense Force building is currently underway in
downtown Juuban. Apparently one or more terrorists are currently inside
the building. We have this clip." A square picture in the upper left
corner of the screen enlarged to cover the entire screen. It clearly
showed a tall, well built
'well-built' I think
Seems reasonable.
both, had apparently thrown their lot in with Sodium
and were sitting with him, though they both had their eyes clenched
shut. Leaning against a far wall were Onyx and Iridium. Both were
watching the screen with detached looks.
Ah, so there are other ruthless ones in the group.
Oh yes. They get very interesting.
There was a short pause as Mercury opened her computer and told it what
to scan for.
'A big guy with big guns,' she typed in
'Who doesn't like us.' She corrected.
already gone down a side corridor and
target three and one were running away directly ahead of it. It fired
the last of a magazine
Wee. That is correct. Magazine, not clip.
See. I can be taught. It just takes a lot of repetition.
at targets four and five but they were already
gone, fleeing up a stairway.
Damage assessment: Insignificant.
Combat assessment: 12% effective
Cause assessment: Firepower not powerful enough
Option assessment: AP ammunition.
Hmm. The ole Senshi's magic clothing might not hold up well against armor
piercing ammo.
I thought that myself.
effectiveness with which the agent operated.
Unnoticed to his right, Sodium was doing the
"I'm-going-to-be-second-in-command-and-be-really-powerful-and-everyone-is-
going-to-pay-homage-to-me-and-I'll-be-happy-and-etc
etc" dance.
Heh
Begining to get a clear picture of Sodium's mental abilities eh?
Nice work
Thank you and thanks for the C&C. As always, If I didn't comment, I just
fixed.
Miashara