Subject: [FFML] [Anime-ish Fic] Revolution
From: ILadyIce@aol.com
Date: 10/8/1999, 11:07 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

        This is an original story -- a trial version, really -- (with a few 
anime influences.. most notably Pokemon) which emerged from a dream I had a 
couple of nights ago (believe me, I have very strange dreams -- from watching 
too much tv ^_^;)

        Anyway -- let me know what you think. 

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R e v o l u t i o n (working title)
prologue
--
the winds of spring
scattered the flowers 
as i dreamt my dream.
now i awaken,
my heart is disturbed.
         - saigyo
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        It was a cold, starless night in the lowlands of Darhaven. The 
triplet moons hung limply in the sky; the light they gave off pallid and 
waning. It was the thick pollution that obscured the celestial shimmer; the 
brown muck hung overhead like an oppressive fog. It had drifted in since 
morning from neighboring factories, and now was free to collect until the 
following week, when the officials from the capital came once again with 
their purifying machines.

        Damaris Rhys found it all rather ludicrous; staring up at the sky, 
nestled within the sweet-smelling grass. It no longer mattered how many times 
the pollution was cleared. The land was already dying. She could feel it 
under her skin, along her spine. They had finally done it. She sighed 
wearily, turning her head, and closing her azure colored eyes. It made her 
feel rather guilty -- she had contributed to it, and now she was leaving, to 
the let the earth fend for itself. 

        "It's a stupid thought. There was never anything I could've done..." 
she trailed off, listening to the soft murmurings of the wind. Her mouth 
twisted into a rueful smile. "I suppose... there was always something. I was 
just so caught up in my own life..."

        /Damaris, you're quite the little pessimist. You don't get that from 
your father./

        She rolled over onto her stomach, wry amusement taking over her 
features. "I don't get it from my mother either, Aunt Ryo." She rested her 
chin on her upright arm, thinking of the other woman's words.

        She had never had a particularly hard life -- not compared to the 
toils of the country's working class. Damaris' childhood had been filled with 
visions of candies, fairies, and toys of all shape and size. It had been 
spent with both parents -- her sweetly youthful, and refined mother, Calista, 
and her rather brassy and outrageous father, Feoras. After that, of course, 
it had been different... Damaris had been exposed to the world -- the good, 
the bad, and the ugly. She found solace in the fact that she would one day 
become a better person... whatever that meant. Her five years at the Academy 
of Higher Arts in southern Indiga had been the first step. She wasn't certain 
if their had ever been a second.

        Absentmindedly, Damaris twisted blades of grass around her fingers. 
Her cinnamon hair blew across her line of vision, as the wind picked up. She 
remembered there had always been a breeze in Hesperos. It had come in from 
the ocean, and had cooled her every night, standing on her dormitory balcony. 
It was a welcome relief from the scorching, and occasionally muggy days spent 
at the academy. 

        It was near the end of the five years that she had decided to become 
a Sphere Fighter. It wasn't an arbitrary decision -- she had spent many a 
night contemplating it. But she knew that there was nothing else out there 
for her... not for a blue-eyed Indigan, daughter of a mainlander or no. Most 
of the academy's denizens had looked upon her as a half-breed, or worse -- 
the child of a deranged northerner, and a barbarian _man_. And the women who 
weren't Indigan... they had avoided her like the plague. Still, they had all 
respected her ability to some degree... Damaris had never been a weakling. 
But she always was, and always would be different. So she had found an 
occupation that was fairly accredited and highly prosperous... And one where 
no one really cared about her origins. The council in Orbtown was not 
discriminatory, in that case.

        The balls of power were moderately plentiful, and creatures of all 
shapes and sizes could be found to store within them, once the power was used 
up. Rare psi spheres were a hot commodity, but even those could be found if 
you looked hard enough. The Sphere Hunters -- collectors who sold the balls 
for a large profit -- were occasionally ruthless, but most could be bargained 
with. Damaris had found a smattering of fame locally, and a modest amount of 
cash from her numerous battles with other Fighters. Her youma-creatures were 
strong, and she had several orbs with high power levels. All in all, she 
found it rather enjoyable, and the constant skirmishes kept her own abilities 
up to par. And it gave her pleasure to think that others acknowledged her 
strength...

        Like the Arena Lords in Mordecai. The thought shook her out of her 
reverie, and she suddenly shivered, finally feeling the cold. Her parents 
would be there... The first she would see of them in seven years.

        "I worry... that they've changed. That they think I've changed."

        Damaris sat up slowly, wrapping her bare arms around her body, 
wishing she had heeded her aunt's words, and worn something warmer. The 
scanty silk dress she wore around her now felt like nothing -- the icy air 
snapped at her through it, making her skin turn numb. She shook her head, and 
her hair fell forward in a shimmering mass, coating her arms like armor.

        She had received the invitation two weeks ago -- in a gold-embossed 
envelope, with her name engraved dramatically on the cover. The note was 
straightforward: "Damaris Magane-Rhys, Sphere Fighter 25th sector, are hereby 
invited to the 200th anniversary of the PsiWar Assembly, in the holy city of 
Mordecai." Under the uniform message were scrawled a few words: "A fortnight 
and a day! Don't be late, don't be early!"

        Damaris found herself flattered, and nervous. A cavalcade of seasoned 
warriors, thrill-seekers, and celebrities flocked to Mordecai on a regular 
basis -- the time of the Assembly brought thousands more. It was not a place 
for the faint of heart. And the letter from her mother had only served to 
further agitate her...

        She rubbed her brow, thinking she should probably head back home. 
There was no use worrying about it now. She'd just have to deal with it when 
she --

        Damaris blinked, suddenly, earlier thoughts momentarily discarded. 
Something had changed. The air itself had stopped moving. She could feel it, 
a building pressure, filled with heat. She stood, slowly, her whole body 
taut. She was no longer alone...

        The lightning ball exploded, without warning, in the spot Damaris had 
occupied only a moment earlier. She had pivoted to the side, merely on 
instinct. The blast had knocked her to the ground, but she struggled to her 
feet, unharmed. She immediately saw the culprit, standing stoically a few 
yards away.

        "What the hell was that?! You nearly blew me up!" she yelled, 
exasperated at his apparent indifference. She hesitated, noticing something 
strange. He looked rather... small. Like a child...

        He scratched his head, frowning. "Right... knew I forgot something." 
He leapt forward, posing dramatically, his dark cape whisked over one 
shoulder. His blue-black hair had fallen awkwardly over his eyes, but he 
ignored it, intent on making a good first impression. "Damaris Magane -- I 
challenge you!" He cleared his throat, and batted his hair away impatiently. 
"To a fight, of course. With spheres."

        "I... understand the concept." Damaris continued to stare at him, 
taken aback. He had blue eyes... An Indigan boy-child. How unusual. And he 
was a Sphere Fighter... Even more unusual... "I thought the legal age to own 
and operate a sphere was 12?" she muttered, her hand closing around the 
single orb she had taken with her. She wasn't really prepared for a battle... 
perhaps he would show a weakness...

        "Hey! I heard that!" he yelled, pulling out a purple-tinged psi 
sphere. His face become suddenly serious. "Don't underestimate me, Damaris."

        "Don't worry... I won't," she said quietly, raising her sphere slowly 
above her head. "I accept your challenge. Devourer, I summon thee!" She 
pitched the ball upward, watching it implode in midair. The broken pieces 
showered down into her hands, where they formed into a round shape once more. 

        The Devourer youma that had emerged from the psi sphere hovered above 
her head, its immense form casting Damaris into utter darkness. It slowly 
found its way to the ground, and lumbered forward, waiting obediently for a 
command from its master.

        The boy looked at it for a few long moments, and then rummaged within 
his robes for a new sphere. The final choice was a glowing, yellow orb, 
thrumming with internal power.

        Once again, Damaris was taken aback. Any novice Fighter would know 
that her youma was immune to almost any pure power attack...

        "Yellow Power, I summon thee!" The ball rose into the air, its size 
growing along with its brightness. "Now! Attack!"

        The two powers clashed high above the ground, as the Devourer closed 
its mouth around the offending orb, the youma vibrating violently as it tried 
to contain the other being. The energy from the battle lit up the grasslands 
like daylight -- Damaris and the boy glowing angry blues. 

        Damaris pressed the palms of her hands together, and closed her eyes, 
lending support to her youma. <Do your thing...> She winced, slightly, 
feeling the power of the sphere's impact. It was strong... but not strong 
enough. The Devourer made a low sound deep in its belly, as a black hole 
began to build, tugging the sphere down into its bottomless center.

        The light suddenly evaporated -- the power sphere ultimately snuffed 
out. There was a small popping noise, and then silence. Her youma swayed from 
side to side, but remained standing. 

        She opened her eyes, blue battle aura fading, and nodded praisingly 
at her youma. "Devourer, return." The creature slowly slid out of focus, as 
its essence trickled back into its sphere. It disappeared entirely with a 
sudden snap, and then it was over. She had triumphed. Much too easily. 
Damaris looked up at her opponent, and saw that he had changed neither stance 
nor expression.

        "Well, darn. Seems like you won." He shrugged, and made an attempt to 
look glum. "Guess I'll have to hand over a sphere." 

        Damaris, disconcerted, was about to protest, but changed her mind 
when she saw the orb he had pulled out. It was strange-looking, an iridescent 
blue; its sides decorated with an assortment of images. Even as far away from 
it as she was, she could feel the quiet, yet fantastic, power within. She 
realized what it was almost immediately. <A deity youma... I thought they 
were only myths...>

        "Here you go." He threw it in her general direction, and it halted, 
inches away from her face, bobbing serenely in midair.

        Damaris held her hand beneath it, and it dropped obediently into her 
palm. Its surface was smooth, almost cold, and as she stared at it, she 
noticed the images changing...

        "Well, I'll be on my way." The boy cleared his throat again, 
adjusting his sagging hat. "It was nice meeting you... oh, and very 
informative battle, by the way."

        "Wait!" she called out as he turned to go. He paused, and waited for 
her to speak. Damaris stared at him intently, brow furrowed in frustration. 
"Who are you?"

        The boy shrugged, averting his eyes from her gaze. "Just a nobody, 
like everyone else." He smiled slyly at her. "But I could never refuse a 
pretty lady my name...  Call me Rai..." He tipped his hat in her direction. 
"Now, I really must be going. So... I'll see you in Mordecai, my dear."

        Damaris watched the boy's retreating form, until he had disappeared 
into the night. She glanced down at the sphere in her hands, speechless. She 
felt almost in a fog. There was no way that boy could've just _given_ away 
something like this orb... It was too valuable, too difficult to obtain...

        "What just happened here?" she whispered to herself.

        The wind howled wordlessly in response.

--

        The police station was deserted, the sign hanging and cracked, the 
lights long dead. The few officers, who had the unfortunate duty of working 
there, had left long before nightfall. Even the vagrants had disappeared into 
the night, tired of yelling their senseless insults at ghosts; and the street 
had finally seemed serene.

        But the police station was not deserted after all, and the vagrants 
had not really disappeared. 

        In the alleyway behind the station, two men, clothed in rags, pried 
away a carefully concealed piece of rotten wood, and made their way into the 
building on hands and knees. They dusted each other off, and glanced around, 
more familiar with the place then they should've been. 

        One turned to the other. "No one saw us come in, right, Skule?"

        "Don't be paranoid," the other snapped. "I used to work here. So I 
should know why and when everyone slinks back into their respective holes."

        The other man nodded, and began stripping off his clothes. Underneath 
he wore the dark uniform of an officer. He stared at his reflection in his 
partner's polished breastplate. "How do I look?"

        "Like an imbecile," Skule scoffed, "what else?"

        The other man glared at him. 

        Skule frowned. "Enough. We need to find the records room." He started 
down the long hallway, purposefully striding underneath the age-old camera. 
He turned the corner, and ran straight into what he was looking for. "Ah. 
Perfect." He called over his shoulder, "Get over here, Senzo."

        "This is it?" The other man had crept up behind Skule, and now peered 
into the sparsely lit room. "It's really... musty."

        "How observant you are," Skule muttered. And louder, "You take the 
left side, I'll take the right. And try not to be so sluglike... We need to 
be out of here by 3."

        The two men split up, rummaging through the yellowed record books. 
The old was mixed in with the new, and vice-versa. There seemed to be no 
order to any of it.

        Senzo suddenly spoke up. "Found something."

        Skule raised an eyebrow, not bothering to look up from his reading. 
"What?"

        "East division Detective Inspector sent to Mordecai," the man read 
slowly, 
"details scant. Po --"

        "That's it." Skule stared at his companion, amazed. "It appears you 
have a brain, after all. Go ahead," he prompted Senzo, "continue."

        "Possibly," Senzo began again, "investigating arena lord." He looked 
up. "Isn't that one of those ball masters?"

        Skule made a face. "You make everything sound so vulgar. But yes, I 
suppose you could call them that..." He put the book he was holding down, and 
went to join his partner. "Does it say anything else?"

        "No, not really," Senzo lied, carefully closing the book. He would 
have to look back on it later. He turned to Skule, his face a dumfounded 
mask. "Do you think those women are behind this?"

        "What are you talking about? The Indigans are paying us..." Skule 
paused, and squinted at the other man, trying to see him in the dim light. 
"I've never known you to be forgetful."

        Senzo shrugged it off. "Sorry."

        Skule sighed, brushing it off as easily as his partner. "Well, this 
has been a waste of time. I suppose we'll have to tell our employers we 
failed..."

        "Do you suppose there's a map somewhere in here?" Senzo asked, 
ignoring the other man's comments. 

        Skule stared at him. "Yes.... underneath the bottom shelf. Why?"

        "No reason," Senzo answered, calmly reaching inside his uniform. 

        "What are you doing?"

        Senzo slowly pulled out a dark, gleaming object, and smiled. "Just 
tying up loose ends. Partner." He raised it, aimed, and --

        "Se - senzo?!"

        -- fired.

        "Well," Senzo sighed, looking down at the mess, "now that that's over 
with."
He clenched his fists, and closed his eyes, concentrating. His form began to 
waver, the frame growing and thinning out. His face changed from a distorted 
grimace to a satisfied smirk. He blinked, his eyes quickly becoming 
accustomed to the low light. He would have to take the map with him, study it 
carefully. The trip to Mordecai would be treacherous.... and impossible 
without a proper guide.

        As for now... his "partner" would have to be disposed of. When the 
policemen came in the morning, all they would find would be another dead 
beggar... probably killed by his own hand.
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Notes:

    Not my best, not my worst. I'd really like to make this into a nice 
character/battle-driven 'fic... Unfortunately, I don't think I'm that great 
at describing fights, and I've had very little time to write anything well 
recently... Any suggestions, comments, etc?
    On to other things... chapter 2 of Chimera should be along shortly. As I 
said, I've had almost no free time (this 'fic was written in a couple hours 
-- I wanted to throw it into the mix while the idea was still relatively 
fresh ^_^;)... but it's almost finished anyway, so...
    Thanks for reading this far! ;)

TTFN,
~ice
        









        
        
        

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