--- Andrew <ark70d@mizzou.edu> wrote:
<snip>

I'd like the work be directed more towards the central conflict
betweeen
Ranma's different sides. Humor is only as effective as the situation
the
characters are in, and I'd like to see more of that early humor you
had
seen.

Good luck in writing Girl Days 15!
---Andrew

Ya know, I do have to admit...this chapter could have been done as a
stand-alone, since it had only a passing reference to the fact that he
was in girl days. Let's see more of the connection.

But I still LMAO reading this one.

- Valandar the Red

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