Quite frankly, the Girl Days motif, in my opinion, is starting to show
some strains. This one wasn't as particularly funny as in the some of
the others, and I didn't find the new character that much more different
to enjoy. If he really wanted to fail, why didn't you let him succeed
which would have (ironically) led to his biggest failure?

I'd like the work be directed more towards the central conflict betweeen
Ranma's different sides. Humor is only as effective as the situation the
characters are in, and I'd like to see more of that early humor you had
seen.

Good luck in writing Girl Days 15!
---Andrew