----- Original Message -----
From: D.F. Roeder <dfroeder@flash.net>
To: FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Tuesday, September 14, 1999 2:59 PM
Subject: [FFML][FanFic][Tenchi] Onna-Tenchi (working title)


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Sorry, I know this was posted over two weeks ago but that is how long it
took me to find that damn boat in Final Fantasy VIII (actually, it only
took half an hour).

Let me begin by saying that this was very funny to read and I liked it a
lot (or at least enought to save a copy of it.) I do however have two
problems (nit-picks) with it.

First is Washu (OAV) would not do this to Tenchi without his prior
permission. She is somewhat saner than her T.V. counter part. Taking a
"sample" from him is one thing. It's not much of a leap to believe he
would enjoy that, though he wouldn't admit. Changing his genetic structure
is a whole other story and could have serious repercussions. Washu has no
idea where Tenchi's Light Hawk Wings come from, what if this interfered
some how? Just as important, what if Tenchi had serious problems with it.
I realize that Tenchi seems laid back, but he is capable of becoming
angry. Just ask Ryoko, she knows and this could just as equally pissed him
off. Its my opinion that Washu (OAV) wouldn't risk Tenchi's ire over
something as trivial as a joke. (My proof is Washu's conversation with
Funaho in OAV 12/13 where much more was at stake). I'm one of the Tenchi
OAV radicals if you haven't guessed it by now.   (: }).

Second is: How come Aeka gets the shaft? He has always treated them
equally in my opinion (OAV-wise). As the author it is completely up to you
as how things transpire, but keep Aeka and her feelings in mind (this is
just a humble request). Too many of us discard her in these stories. I
realize she comes off as fickle the way she switched from Yosho to Tenchi,
but Yosho was just hero worship. Tenchi's the real deal. Ok, enough of my
fanatacism. All I ask is that you throw Aeka a boner... uh-hmm... I mean
bone.

"Tenchi-sama?" Aeka inquired.

Again, I enjoyed your story and I thank you for writing it.

Damien
damien_searight@msn.com
ICQ: 24113246

(I'll try and comment on all Tenchi Muyo and UY stories that cross the
list. I now how motivating getting C&C can be.)