First off, I'd like to thank you for writing back!  It's appreciated.

Firstly it's Manila, not manilla, secondly it's Identical not identicle,

ya need

to use ur spell checker more and also you left off with Gojira's fighting

the

asswipe to protect a cute girl, what the hell is this scene doing here?

    To respond to your points:

    The spelling is a problem, I admit, but none of the programs I write in
has a spell checker (which, I admit sucks), so I end up having to edit them
'by hand', and a few always slip past me.  For this, I appologize.
    Secondly... Um, I didn't leave of with the confrontation between Gojira,
and Jiro.  There's another chapter in there where we cut to a scene with San
Yun (who was mentioned in this last post, AND a second half that has Toshiro
beign scolded (albeit breifly) by his grandfather because of the fight.
    Lastly, I'll admit maybe my use of cut scenes is a little confusing...
but I'm hoping to tie everything together as the series goes on.  Right now,
I'm just trying to establish most of the characters, so that they don't just
spring out of no where later when it's plot convenient... I think the time
between posts tends to chop up the rythym too much.
    Thank you for your time, comments, questions, and concerns.

    P.S. Because of the spelling thing, and because most of these are first
'off-the-cuff' drafts, I would like to humbly request if there is anyone out
there who would mind acting as prereaders for this series.  Hopefully, with
your help, I'll be able to catch problems like these before I subject the
rest of the list to my mistakes.  E-mail me privately at
Sukyandaru@digitalweb.net if you're interested.

     -Ki o tsukite, mina!
      -Sukyandaru

    "There are things I will not tolerate.  Students loitering on campus
after school.  Horrible murders with hearts being removed.  And also
smoking."
        -Principal Snyder, BtVS: The Puppet Show