Gary Kleppe wrote:

An Awakening of Demons, Chapter 1
by Phil Kagami <kagami@jeack.com.au>
Archive number 845

P-chan is attacked by a demon and helped by an unlikely rescuer, while
Nodoka reveals a secret about Ranma.

Heh. Nice one-liner. I'll have to remember this for the synopsislist. :)

I don't usually care for "Ranma becomes super-powerful" fics, which this
seems like it might be turning into, but this was one of the best I've
seen. The plot seems quite imaginitive, the characters are well-handled,
and the writing has some excellent descriptive work. Looking forward to
seeing where this goes.

Well, Ranma gets more powerful but I wouldn't call it super-poweredor
invincible. I guess the best comparison would be Inu-Yasha with
better martial arts and thankfully, no Tetsusaiga (now that thing _is_
over-powered :)

Thanks for the very kind comments, Gary. That gives me hope
that my writing style and characterization is going in the right
direction (up).

Chapter 2 seems to be growing by leaps and bounds but it'll
be coming out soon.

Phil.

Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html