Now how on earth are we going to pull this off?
Hmmm...
Okay, this was well-written, and you obviously did a lot of brainstorming
to put the thing together, but...
The challenge was to write a *convincing* pairing. This wasn't convincing.
It was contrived.
Next.
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Shareena: "Ugh, what's with this test? 'If you could
pick one Pokemon, what would it be, and why?' Puh-lease.
...what did you put, Duncan?"
Duncan's yo-yo: 'C-A-T-E-R-P-I-E'
Shareena: "Okay...and why?"
Duncan's yo-yo: 'S-T-R-I-N-G-S-H-O-T'
Shareena: "...figures."
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