"What if I get lost?"

"I have that under control, sweetheart."

Ryoga and Akari left the hotel, carrying their umbrellas.  If you
looked closely, you could tell that Akari had tied her wrist to her
husband's with his bandanna.

        Awww.. that is so sweet.  *Sighs* I have to say, I like
this.  You really wrote this in only an hour? I'm impressed! ^_^
The only thing I can say to improve it is to make the part about
Looking for Ryouga less hasty, but then I understand the time
constraint on the challenge and that you had to rush a bit to finish
it all up.  :)

        In any case, It made me sigh and shake my head and think of
Love.  :)


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Lost "Dragon-Gal"
of Shimitsu-Ryuu.
Princess of Chaos.
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curse unto you, But
acceptance can conquer that fear you hold high, through acceptance
comes peace.....
are you willing to try?"
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