While I've seen only a bit about Kodomo no Omocha (and found it amusing), I 
enjoyed this fanfic immensely. Particularly the scene during Sana's last 
hours with Akito. You could almost feel the emotion between them.

There was no other errors as that I could find.

This is a wonderful fresh break from recent fanfics. Thank you very much!


Until I find something new to write, Ja ne-

Dark Alpha <AlphSailor@aol.com> formerly Sailor Alpha
     Fanfics, projects at http://www.gehirn.com/ | gehirn = brain in German

"In the name of the Moon, I will let my friend Sailor Moon punish you!"
                    -Sailor Mercury, Alternate Visions, part 4