Whew! I just went through and read the version of Chapter 2 I posted and
realised something - writing a story between 3-4am in the morning is
never a smart idea. So many errors and mistakes. I wrote the whole of
chapter 2 in 2 hours, and had started it at between 3-4am. While ideas
might flow better at that hour for me, I just am not any good with the
keyboard. I really should have read it better before posting it.   

Hmmm... I've never C&C'd one of my own stories before. I guess there is a
first time for everything! ^_^

James 
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