Hi,
    You really outdid yourself this time. I especially love the way 
the chapter ended leaving it open for possible sequels in the future. 
I can't wait to see what possibilities can be developed upon this 
truly deserving structures. Oh and I am definitely not an Akane fan 
but this time I really don't mind Akane ending up with Ranma in the 
end. Although if Lina would have lost her mother I might have felt 
differently. Oh and finally are you planning a reconcilliation between
Lina and Luna. I truly hope so.
    Oh well that's it for now. Keep up the great work and may your
stories shine upon the sea of quality.

Sayonara
Reispirit
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My hand is the divine fist.
Blossom oh fallen seed and 
call upon thy hidden powers.
Bring forth the glorious mother of
Destruction!!!!!!!!
 -Grahf "The Emperor of Darkness"
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