On Mon, 13 Sep 1999 17:24:38 -0700 (PDT), Video Game Addicted Person
<vg_ap@yahoo.com> wrote:

    One thing that I didn't like about this was that
the whole story moved too fast. Characters talk too
much to explain things to readers, and unnecesseary
details are given. What I would have liked was either
a short, mysterious darkfic, or a long, self-speaking
tragedy.
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Ahhh...  But you see, the neat thing about FanFic is that while trying to
entertain others, I am really doing this for my own self-gratification.  I
wanted to write a fast paced attention grabber, that came with an
interesting twist at the end.  That it did so as well as it did was
gratifying to me.  Writing this was a great learning experience.

Have fun folks!!

Robert.

Robert Knighton
knighton@scctel.com

"I don't write for those who already know the universe I created, I write
for those who are discovering it for the first time.  Thus it always seems
fresh and new."

-- Unknown author