Reispirit wrote:
Hi,
Excellent work as usual. I especially liked the revised scenes
concerning
Lina's posse's discussion with Luna. I find the new scenes work far better
to
convey Luna's feelings than what was previously shown.
Thanks.
Oh and I'm not sure
but I suspect that the place that the king sent Zelgadis, namely Kalmaart,
sounds
like a spoof of a certain mass merchant which I shall not name. Then again
I'm
probably wrong.
Heh. Kalmaart is a Duchy bordering Zefielia in the Slayers world. A reallynice
map (colours and all) of the Slayers world can be found at Slayers
Universe (www.inverse.org). It's great info and really helps with picturing
the journeys of Lina and co - if only I had when I started. :)
Oh well.
Well that's it for now. Keep up the great work and I look forward to
more in the future.
Part 7 out soon - hopefully.
Oh and I apologize for not responding sooner. I sent
this out twice but unfortunately it was never recieved. This was due to the
fact that I misspelled the e-mail address twice. Hopefully this time I'll
get
it right.
Thanks for writing!
Phil.
Sayonara
Reispirit
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My hand is the divine fist.
Blossom oh fallen seed and
call upon thy hidden powers.
Bring forth the glorious mother of
Destruction!!!!!!!!
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