Subject: Re: [FFML][Ranma/Slayers][revised]View! Through the Looking Glass
From: Phil
Date: 9/12/1999, 8:06 PM
To: Reispirit
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Reispirit wrote:

Hi,
     Excellent work as usual. I especially liked the revised scenes
concerning
Lina's posse's discussion with Luna. I find the new scenes work far better
to
convey Luna's feelings than what was previously shown.

Thanks.

Oh and I'm not sure
but I suspect that the place that the king sent Zelgadis, namely Kalmaart,
sounds
like a spoof of a certain mass merchant which I shall not name. Then again
I'm
probably wrong.

Heh. Kalmaart is a Duchy bordering Zefielia in the Slayers world. A reallynice
map (colours and all) of the Slayers world can be found at Slayers
Universe (www.inverse.org). It's great info and really helps with picturing
the journeys of Lina and co - if only I had when I started. :)

Oh well.
     Well that's it for now. Keep up the great work and I look forward to
more in the future.

Part 7 out soon - hopefully.

Oh and I apologize for not responding sooner. I sent
this out twice but unfortunately it was never recieved. This was due to the
fact that I misspelled the e-mail address twice. Hopefully this time I'll
get
it right.

Thanks for writing!

Phil.

Sayonara
Reispirit
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My hand is the divine fist.
Blossom oh fallen seed and
call upon thy hidden powers.
Bring forth the glorious mother of
Destruction!!!!!!!!
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