I had the privilege of reading this before publication, so Chris has
already heard all the usual stuff I'd say in a C&C.  I'll just say this,
to everyone else: 

Even if you don't usually read lemons, do yourself a favor and read this
one if you can stand erotica at all.  It's amazing that something this
kinky can be so charming, WAFFy, and (dare I say it?) perhaps even
"original-flavor". 

Chris: Thanks for writing and sharing!

Vince Seifert    Network Analyst     seifertv@csus.edu
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