Old Soul 1/2 - by Francis Bourque <fbourque@abacom.com>
If you wanted any others chapters of 'Old Soul 1/2'
go on: "Ranchan Totally Crossed Out"
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My thank to Tannim Umoren <tannim@earthlink.net>, who offerred the space for my fanfic.
I will post on the FFML <ffml@fanfic.com> and at this webpage when I will finish any news part.
Eight chapters in summary, more to follow...
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For chapter four, it's at 10kb already.
it's a lot of fun to read, even for me.
It will be at least 30k when finish.
Lenght for previous and future chapters and a brief descriptions:
Prologue: 16k It's a beginning!
Chapter one: 36k The fun with curses!
Chapter two: 14k Independence day! (nothing to do with aliens)
Chapter three: 31k Furikan High will never be the same again, ...
Chapter four: 30k to 40k. Nabiki in action and other crazyness.
Chapter five: 50k or more. A lot of actions, special surprises, ...
Chapter six: 25k to 35k. A little more about curses, ...
Chapter seven: 20k to 30k. Where the hell are we now!
Chapter eight: 15k to 25k. A pervert was enough, but two?!
Chapter nine: ??? Very good new, but not for all involved.
Chapter ten: ??? It boring today! Oops! Talk too soon.
Chapter eleven: ??? Ten easy steps to unlock a curse!
Chapter Twelve: ??? It's too insane to write. It's why I will do it!
Chapters nine to Twelve have a title but no summary.
Will be design later.
Now a little teaser for chapter four.
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Chapter four: "A date! Are you out of your mind?!"
[Morning]
Akane was kissing passionately Ranma-chan, who was returning the kiss
ten-fold. They were in bed, doing all the thing young couples did
normally without being inhibited in the least . . .
"Ahhhhhhhh! Pervert!" cried Akane after awakening abruptly from that dream.
She was not even sure who was the pervert. That concerned her greatly too.
[Diner room]
Akane kept her eyes on her breakfast. She didn't dared to look at Ranma-chan.
She's very embarrassed just thinking of her dreams about her.
Ranma for her part was concerned a little about Akane. But she was so hungry
that she didn't look at her more that two or three times.
Maintaining a shield against her father didn't helped either.
When they were finished, Akane cried:
"Time to go! Hurry or we will be late again!"
Akane then grappled Ranma's left arm. She then blushed a little,
which was remarked by Nabiki, and sprint out to school.
[Lunch time]
"Have you hear what happened to Kuno?" asked Sayuri.
"Yeah. Ranma seemed to have sent him way out of tokyo." replied Yuka.
"That US military base was not a good place to land either." said Sayuri.
"They will release him tomorrow. Why they couldn't kept him?!" half joked Yuka.
[Under a tree, same time]
"So Lina, when will we see you boyfriend?" asked Yukina,
a timid girl of medium height not much more developped than Ranma,
green eyes, long blond hair and in a school uniform.
"Yukina, I'm not a pervert! I prefer girls anyway." replied Ranma,
catching too late what she had just said.
"Eu, I mean . . . Oh! I give up. You wouldn't understand even if I
try to explain all about me." mutered Ranma. Yukina heard it thought.
"It not a shame to liked girls, just don't tried anything with me.
Some of my best friends are like that too." explained Yukina,
not wanting Ranma to be afraid of her because of shames now that
she had shared her big secret with her.
"It's more complicated than that, but thank!" finally replied Ranma.
"It's no problem. I won't tell either." said Yukina.
"And don't call me Lina please."
"Why? Nabiki said it was your name and that Ranma was just a nick name."
"She did what! I can't believed it! I will have a talk with her tonight."
said Ranma, with a serious expression in her eyes, which mean business.
[Tonight]
They had finished supper since 2 hours. Akane was at a friend house.
The two father were drinking, playing and cheating as usual and
Kasumi had goes out with Dr. Tofu on a date.
They had the house for themself.
"Hey! Nabiki! Can we have a talk, please?" asked Ranma.
"Sorry, have to go!" said Nabiki, and try to run for it.
"'Stop'!" yelled Ranma.
Nabiki for her part was not as stop as she had like. She was able to quit
the house, but the 'stop' spell had stopped her near the koi pond.
"<Splash>!"
The momentum was another mather entirely.
"You will pay for that!" cried Nabiki, after resurfacing the water.
"Sorry! I didn't meaned to get you wet." said Ranma behind her.
After some thought, Nabiki asked her:
"How come I'm not paralysed?"
"That spell is a 'stop' spell. As long as nothing touch you or in your case
wet you, you can't move for two minutes more or less." explained Ranma.
"Good to know." thought Nabiki.
[Nabiki bedroom, after she had changed of clothes]
"So what did you wanted?" asked Nabiki.
"Why had you said to anyone that my name was Lina?"
"Simple. Your scam with Ryoga can't go trough if you were called or known
as Ranma Saotomes."
"Yeah, it make sense. But can you explained to me the story I heard at
school about my 'boyfriend' and me going on a date? I never talk of
anything like that." asked Ranma.
"I'm not responsible for all the gossip at school, Lina." Nabiki said,
smilling like the cat who had ate the canari, and added:
"Before I forget. Whatever you do, don't go on a date before sunday."
"Why I'd wanted to go on a date with Akane anyway!" exclaimed Ranma.
"You do have a thing for my little sister then, thank for the info!"
said Nabiki, even more happy than before.
"Very funny! Oh, forget it!" said Ranma and went out of the bedroom in
closing the door very hard. Some pictures come uneven.
[End of teaser]
Hoped you enjoy!
Salut bien !