Yey! yet another fine chapter of girl days!  Rather than quote the whole
hilarious thing just to give a few pointless comments, I'll jut point one
little apparent inconsistency out:
 

        Luna-P merely pointed a paw.  And Ranma realized that she had 
at her beck and call tons of hentai heroes, cowboys 

	Are you sure it was not supposed to be _sentai_ heroes?  
(Oh, wait, this is Nerima we are taking about, so they are probably both. 
Still, if Ranma is identifiyng them correctly, Akane might have just been
given something a bit more substantial proof than usual to backup her
calling Ranma a 'pervert'.)

	Loved the rest of it, especially the characterizations, as they
maintained a nice balance of characters and abilities, in a way that made
the hybrid characters recognizable & enjoyable.  (IMHO, this is a
distinguishing trait of most of the well-written fusion stories I've read,
although the occasional OOC presentations can be satisfiying in their
originality and willingness to go against the grain.) 

	Well, that's about it for useful criticism, apart from tossing in a few
more servings of praise for the Kuno-Gosunguiki scenes, the Kasumi scene,
the parents' wild charge scene, the treatment of shampoo's curse, and a
lot of other really good stuff in this chapter (and the previous one's
too!) that would make this post awfully long and a more tedious read than
it already is.
-- 
"There is nothing in this world of value...
 Nothing worth risking our lives for...
	 ...except 'erhaps... 
	...what little we can create ourselves."
		Daisuke Ido (Gunnm / Battle Angel)
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