--- Nicholas Leifker <nightelf@thekeep.org> wrote:
 

Why yes, Hell has frozen over.  Why do you ask?

Clothes Make The...

Chapter Nine:

Whaddaya know!  It's been a pretty long time since I read 1-8, but it
is still good to see you working on CMT.

I figure you want useful comments rather than a pat on the back, so I
guess I'm going to offer some criticism on Nabiki.  Her bisexuality
confession to Ranma near the end of the chapter was unlike her.  It
didn't seem to serve much of a purpose, as she didn't get any new
openness from it, but it did put an aspect of her personality out in
the open that could weaken her in the future.

That's about all I have to offer.  It's not something that bothers me
as a casual reader, but in giving C&C I wanted to have something to
offer.

Send a carbon copy of any reply to my main address at
Draxonx@hotmail.com if you dont mind, I check it more often than this
account.

It's good to see you back at work =P

Draxon-X
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