Reispirit wrote:

Hi,
    Great job again.

Thanks!!

It's nice to see another chapter. Hopefully it won't be
the last.

No, it won't - having just received some help on a problemin the next chapter
(thanks and a mention to him in the next
chapter as well :), it looks like things will continue until the
planned end of the series (another 3 chapters).

As for the Amelia/Lina scene you were refering to. While I don't
believe Amelia's ever how shall we say forced Lina to follow a request
she's made, she has however managed to convince Lina to assist her on
a couple of occasions. On the other hand Lina usually has ulterior motives
when it vomes to helping out others. My suggestion would be to have Amelia
persuade Lina by suggesting that the Mirror might be able to change certain
parts of her body. Using this approach Lina would be eager to go along if
for
no other reason then a possible "cure" for certain attributes.

You know, this would be absolutely perfect and in keeping with Lina'scharacter.
With your permission, I'll add this to the revision of Change!

    Well that is it for now. Keep up the great work, May your muse smile
upon this and all your future work, And I hope that my advice helps.

It does indeed! Thank you!

Oh and I'm posting this in case I'm wrong when it comes to the Lina/Amelia
situation. The last thing I want to do is provide inaccurate info.

Oh, you aren't wrong - not at all. This is the purpose of the FFML - to
hearsuggestions and make potential changes to one's fic. In many cases,
suggestions help break a case of writer's block, and remember, this
continuation wouldn't have seen the light of day without all of the readers
encouragement and suggestions (with thanks to Psycho Sam again).

So, never be shy about providing opinions in C&C - it's what most
authors live for and need to improve their fics, and if nothing else, it
tells them people are reading the fic. Many fics die from lack of
response.

I certainly appreciate every bit of response I get. So, thanks once
again. The revision should be out soon - I'll wait and see if there
are other suggestions incoming. :)

Phil.

Sayonara
Reispirit
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Blossom oh fallen seed and
call upon thy hidden powers.
Bring forth the glorious mother of
Destruction!!!!!!!!
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