Well, I like it. But it's... wierd.

This is one of those fics where, if some sort of conecting element doesn't pop up soon, I will lose interest. So far, you've turned Ryoga into a cat-man, dropped him into Champion City, then into Pokemon, all without an explination of Why, or What. (As in, What the F**K is going on here, anyway?)

I mean, even Alice in Wonderland (So far the only thing I can compare this too) had a bit more cohesion.

An explanation is coming in part 4 or 5.  Yeah, I know this is a _really_ strange fic if you don't know the whole story.  Or if you do.  But I'm hoping to tie all the strings together.

Just my two bits.

Oh! As a suggestion - manually format the text to about 70 characters. It makes it a LOT easier on the rest of us to read. (I dislike having to move the text to WordPad just to read it.)

Heh.  I've had a hell of a time trying to get it to work in e-mail and on my webpage.  It just doesn't want to go.  Anyway, I'm brand new at this, obviously, so hopefully I'll figure it out soon.

Ciao,
Jason, Victim of the Longniichuan, J-ryu

Matt Dodd


"Tell me, where is Furinkan High?" -Ryoga Hibiki

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