Subject: Re: [FFML][Ranma] Girl Days part 12
From: Sebastian Weinberg
Date: 8/4/1999, 1:06 PM
To: Fanfic Mailing List


Mina-san, Ohayou!

On Tue, 3 Aug 1999 Kenjiko2@AOL.com wrote:

: 	Girl Days
: 
: 	A Ranma 1/2 fanfiction
: 
: 	By Robert Haynie

I've been following this only since recently, but it's already one
of the fics that I look forward to reading the most.  Great stuff
all the way through.  Finally a "Ranma stuck as a girl" fic done
the way I would have done it - so now I don't have to. :)


: 	Nabiki was NOT happy.  The spell had tried to resolve the bunny
: suit in a way that was really really unexpected.

Oooh!  Oooooh!


: 	"You don't look that bad, Nabiki," Akane soothed.
: 
: 	Nabiki didn't reply.  She just wrinkled her pink nose while her
: whiskers twitched adorably.  Idly she ran her fingernails through the
: thick pelt of white fur she was now sporting.  One of her lapine ears
: twitched, and she desperately fought off urges to go hit the carrot
: sticks.
: 
: 	Same shape, same girl-- new species.  Bunny Girl indeed.
: 
: 	Nabiki, as had been noted, was NOT happy.  And this wizard bozo
: was going to PAY for making her look like a overdeveloped and
: underclad cousin of Lola Bunny.

Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy!  What I wouldn't give to be in the
immediate vicinity right now. :)


: Akane and Cologne stayed back to coordinate and to see what Akane
: could detect with the Mercury Computer, P-chan (or as one wag called
: him, Luna-P) grumbling.  He was DAMN glad that if he had to be a
: talking magical cat he was a MALE talking magical cat.

Um.  Since I seem to remember distictly that Luna was the female
one of the two cats in SM, should I interprete this to mean that
the lunification of Ryouga only went so far, and did leave him his
original gender?


: 	(When I get my hands on that jerk I'm gonna Righteous Tigresses
: Fury his butt so hard he'll have lower his pants to blow his nose.)

"Have to lover", I believe.


: 	Ranma shrugged, and went into the dojo to change into her
: hardsuit.  Why throw away more allies?  Even Kasumi, who seemed oddly
: capable...

Kasumi *always* was oddly capable. :)


: 	Cologne, Nodoka, Akane, and Luna-P were all attempting to find a
: source that would ID Yerburger's location. 

"Yerfburger's", isn't it?


There was also one other typo that I noticed on the first reading,
but I forgot where or what it was.  Great, funny stuff!


Sebastian
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