Subject: Re: [FFML][DRAFT][DARK][R.5] Crimson Dawn Ch. 6
From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 8/4/1999, 12:26 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Jed M Bidwell <Jedediah@tri-countynet.net> wrote:

Ranma's being exceptionally stupid. "Okay, I wanna kill this guy, so
I'll go to a public place where people will see the two of us together
first." Of course, that's not necessarily OOC for him. It might be that
he's subconsciously trying to get caught; or he might be just
exhibiting, well, exceptional stupidity. ^_^

       Actually, as I imagined it, Ranma is in a crowd of people who have
never seen him before, and don't even know what Jusenkyou is. If anyone
asks, Taki left with a red-haired girl that nobody knew. But, would you have
any suggestions? I do agree that there is room for improvement.

Yeah. If you don't want Ranma to be screwing up, then have him get a
disguise. Preferably one with a wig, as your story seems to be taking
the anime hair color at face value and it would be an obvious giveaway.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html