Overall, good chapter. The writing coveyed the right atmosphere, and the
character emotions were well-handled.

Cologne probably shouldn't pray to the Kami; the Chinese have their own
gods (and it's possible that the Amazons have yet others).

Ranma's being exceptionally stupid. "Okay, I wanna kill this guy, so
I'll go to a public place where people will see the two of us together
first." Of course, that's not necessarily OOC for him. It might be that
he's subconsciously trying to get caught; or he might be just
exhibiting, well, exceptional stupidity. ^_^

Keep it up; looking forward to more of this.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html