This was scary. I can actually see Kuno writing something like this! ^_^

Good--I was hoping for something like that.

Minor nit:
Change paragraphs when someone new speaks.

That was another joke.  If you've ever read some of the older English 
novels, they don't change lines when new people speak.  I seem to remember 
Sherlock Holmes being like this...

[In order to preserve this fic's "All Audiences" rating, this part of
the fic, including the 20-page lemon scene, had to be cut.  Apologies
to those who were looking forward to it.  And for those who were
wondering, the line "I'll show YOU what can be done with a pointy
stick" is not included.--ed.]

Aww... It would have been a great line to put in there if you ask me.

But it wouldn't be Kuno-esque, would it?  ^_^

Emily Siazon
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