Hmm. Overall, I like this story, and think of the
situations as very possible. But it still seems like
a copycat of Gary's work, no matter how good it is.

     While Ranma and Shampoo's relationship is very
well done and beautiful, I personally would have
wanted him to be associated with no one, being someone
who is manipulating everyone for either good or bad
purpose. For the former, maybe a prophet of sorts to
insure that future would be better somehow by his
existance? For the latter, perhaps a devil posing as a
human to spread dangerous chaos that is barely
disguised as a comedy? Just a thought that occured to
me while reading it.
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