Subject: Re: [FFML][DTP][BGC] Dominon Crisis Chapter 1 v.1.0
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 7/29/1999, 2:33 PM
To: "Trevor Hoffert" <battlekrome@HOTMAIL.COM>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>


C&C please

Since you asked.



Chapter 1: 8 ways to kill a

Ways to Kill

Boomer
or How I learned to blow stuff up

Learned to Blow Stuff Up

Cute title.

Leona for the most part was bored with her
route but

route, but

being dedicated to her job she

job, she

stop speeders. Being pulled over by a cop most people
could accept. Being pulled over by a tank, that got some
people a little upset.

Just a little.


Leona was working on her paperwork. Much to her
dismay her

dismay,


Object heading west on 104th street is believed to be an armored trooper

A VOTOM? ^_^


Leon had just commented over the radio to Daley
about maybe getting the army to handle it. In seeming
response to his request a

request,

small tank drove by. Leon did a
double take and radioed to Daley >Who's driving a tank? <

That scene would have been better if it had been written oout instead of
'summerized.'


Leona barely noticed the motorbike she passed on
her way to 104th street. She screeched to a stop on an
overpass overlooking the AD police position. The Boomer
itself was half a klick away (2.5/8th of a mile(1) and working
it's way through the AD Police as if they were cannon fodder.

Errr, Isn't that what they are? ^_^


Leona watched as the sabot round hit the Boomer's Left
shoulder and took its'

its


Leona watched as the Boomer landed after its'

its

quarter
klick jump and looked at the steaming hole in its'

its

chest.
The acid from the round had mixed with the internal fluids
and was dripping down the Boomers front.

Nasty.

Of course many things are attracted to Boomer rampages.
AD police like moths to a flame and Knight Sabers like the
Orkin man to said moths. Except the Knight Sabers killed
Boomers instead of AD police.

Boomers do a good enough job at it anyway.


Leona noticed the motorbike with rider before the Boomer
did and thus was able to pull to the side as the Boomer was
distracted by the motorcyclist in Hardsuit. Leona not being
one to give up followed but decided to watch these
vigilante's

vigilantes

large part of her driving Bonaparte around. What really was
frowned upon by the Cheif

Chief

was her utter abandon at chasing
after crooks while she was on patrol.

Leona: It's called 'enthusiasm.'

This usually led to
many, many damage reports and half a city block of
destruction. This was ok

okay

custom retool Bonaparte's engine and thus Bonaparte
was able to make suprisingly fast speeds while on
level ground. Off the beaten path as some call

called



Leona doesn't like being ignored and therefore
decided on a standard light explosive round.

It's one way to get people's attention.


Priss watche

watched

D.B. Sommer