I'm glad to see that this series is starting up again.  I haven't read 
that many fics that combine Ranma 1/2 and Tenchi Muyo, but so far this is 
the only one I've liked.
     I didn't really care for this part as much as the others.  I guess it's 
because it has nothing to do with the original Tenchi Muyo storyline.  The 
other parts provided insights into the characters' actions (like Ryouko 
crashing both spaceships) that were really fascinating.  It provided depth 
that was sorely lacking in the original.
     I did, however, enjoy seeing more about the travels of Ukyou and 
company.  The character relations are taking interested turns.  Was is 
really necessary to give Ukyou a nannichuan curse though?  That seemed too 
obvious to me.
     Akane's curse brings up a number of interesting possibilities that I 
look forward to being explained.  It also provided me with a little 
satisfaction, stemming from the fact that I was able to guess where the 
twins came from.  It was kind of obvious if you saw the series, but I'll 
take what I can get.
     Nadoko's cursed form is actually Yosho's daughter reborn.  I can 
picture some soap opera scenes coming.  "Yes, I am actually the long lost 
daughter of you Grandfather, who is actually centuries old, but can either 
look 25 or 65 depending on the day he's having."
     I'm looking forward to more, but maybe you could add on a more detailed 
synopsis of past events.  I had to reread part 5 to get the significance of 
Xian Pu and I completely forgot about Ryouga's police friend.


Caine


--
"Isn't sanity just a one trick horse?  I mean, when you get right down
to it, all it knows is one trick: rational thought.  But if your nuts,
the sky's the limit!"

--The Tick


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