Well, I have only a few comments on this 'fic. It started out fairly
interesting, Ranma's cursed half being SuperGirl. If you had stuck with
that, I think the story would have been alot better. The cross-over
elements were not the problem, the problem was the story degenerated into
a mishmash of cliches. And flitted all over the place, with narration from
various people from various worlds/dimensions/etc. I think if you lost the
multiple tangents of this story and stuck to the Ranma as supergirl
storyline, it would probably be pretty cool. Also, a decrease in narrator
interuption would also be great.

Just my two yen,

Chris