ummm...I accidentally deleted the name of the person who sent me these 
comments, but maybe if he remembers what he said, he will know I'm talking to 
him. Gomen!

<<Masochist huh?>>
Actually, Sleet just likes seeing people get hurt. But he explores the 
more...pain-worshipping side of sex in the next cycle. Remember that 
"personal review" Mary offered him? *lewd leer*

<That's a big convent.>
More importantly, that's a lot of dead nuns.

<<AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
She sounds like a psycho Azusa Shiratori (Ranma 1/2) or B.B. Hood from
Vampire Hunter. >>

Actually, someone else pointed that out to me too. she made me play Vampire 
Hunter with her, and showed me BB Hood...so now I'm thinking, Vampire 
Hunter/Double Vision Crossover??

<<I wonder, if she watched "Saving Private Ryan" would she have an orgasm in
the movie theatre?
If she were born just a few centuries earlier, she would have made the
perfect bride for Vlad Tepes.>>

Well, the Private Ryan thing could very well be. Mary is the type who thinks 
watching gory surgical procedures in an OR is a form of foreplay...^^;;

<<Domini Di Morta- Latin: Control of the Dead. What are you thinking?>>
*grin grin grin* WOuldn't you like to know?

<<NOW I'm sure she's got a screw loose, her favourite song's a commercial.
(No offense to your friend, I'm just commenting on the characterisation.
^_^)>>
That's where you're wrong my friend..."The Bumblebee Tuna Song" is actually a 
song by the ska group Mephiskapheles. Betcha didn't know that one!

<<She ought to get along fine with Bloody Mary if they were on the same 
side.>>

Nah....Natsumi wouldn't have shot em, while Mary would have kneecapped them, 
then gone over an tortured their writhing bodies...well, you get the idea.

<<Girl: You can bleed for hours whilst I take immense pleasure at your every
whimper.
Natsumi: ..... (starts to edge away)>>

Actually, that's something she might say...you'll have to read cycle four to 
get the full story....

<<Nice story overall, combat sequences were a bit weak but then whose isn't?>>

Okay..suggestion: besides saying the combat sequences were wea, throw in some 
suggestions on how to make them stronger. Or didn't you have any ideas on 
how? ;)

Thanks for the comments, whoever you were. ^_~

Captain Exposition