Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][Xover] Apotheosis 1: Quarter Moon Madness
From: David Johnston
Date: 7/19/1999, 4:35 PM
To: rcarson@rcarson.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

I like it, but really, giving Youma normal (western!) names and just 
tacking "ite" on the end is very cheesy.  Dark Kingdom nomenclature is 
very simple.  Major villains are named after mineral substances.  
Disposable villains are named after their central gimmick.  

Incidentally, wouldn't the restaurant have been set on fire after 
Ranma's first engagement with the Elementals?