Subject: Re: [FFML][C&C][Ushio&Tora] Discoveries, Chapter 1
From: Ronny Hedin
Date: 7/19/1999, 7:22 PM
To: "David A. Tatum" <desaix@sysnet.net>
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

does not belong to me.  According to the back of the box of my tapes, it
was based on a manga by Kazuhiro Fujita (I should say the manga does not

33 volumes of manga in fact, which makes me suspect basing a fic on
the anime is somewhat like doing an OMG fic based only on the anime.
OTOH, people do that all the time, so I guess it's fine. Not like
I've read it myself, anyway. ^_^

"So," Asako said as she and her best friend started walking back from the
last day of school before a break.  "Are you all packed and ready to go on
the trip to my grandparents tommorow, Mayuko?"

Suggest "the break" instead of "a break".
tomorrow

"Daaaaad!"

*insert mallets* ^_^

The only word that seemed to catch in the monster's mind was 'girls,' and
that gave him certain ideas.  "Ah!  It's a mating ritual for you human's,
isn't it?"

humans

"Bah," Tora complained.  "You humans have such complex mating rituals that
it hurts my head to even think about it.  I don't understand why you don't
just take this Ayako girl you hang around with and be done with it?"

"What?  I never said I liked Ayako!" Ushio stammered.

You just wrote "aSako"; I don't remember which is correct, but obviously
*one* must be wrong. :-)

"Well, then," she said, standing up and starting out the room.  "If we're
going to be bringing them to what may be their final resting place, we
should at least let them have a decent place to sleep at night.  I'm going
to go fix there rooms."

their

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opinions? well...

Waii! Ushio to Tora fanfic!

...and that's pretty much all I can say about, after a mere 12k. Do
continue. ^_^


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Ronny Hedin, thark@mangakai.org, http://nabiki.newberry.edu/thark/
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