This is my first fic series in here. Tell me how did
I do, be honest. Give me all the C&C that would be
good for my health.

It possesses a naive candor faithful to the source
material, and is of similar depth. While your prose
would most likely induce an embolism in most English
teachers, it goes well with the overall feel of the
story. It's very cute.

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