While I could mention many faults found in this
fanfic, one thing quite simply shocked me; the use of
Lunar songs. I can't believe the author didn't even
bother to change the lyrics even a tiny bit. At least
he had the sense to give their credits to appropriate
owners, but still, isn't the purpose of fanfics to
use your creativity? I'm just glad this sort of thing
doesn't happen often, otherwise I'd be ranting moreso
than any other writer ever will.
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