allyn yonge <ayonge@yahoo.com> wrote:

This is a nice story.

I agree. I especially liked the bit of symbolism with the hair at the
end.

Just one little nitpick, Kuno-chan's nickname is spelled either "Tatchi"
or "Tacchi."

There is a large body of work on Zen that shows men
and women turning to Zen due to personal tragedy. 

Yes, and asking "When is Zen's next fic coming out?" (Sorry, but
*someone* had to say it. ^_^)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html