Earlier parts were posted to the FFML yesterday, but you can find them all at:
http://www.runet.edu/~sratliff/works/Drafts/ALittleEarlier.txt
Comments and Critiques are welcome, and encouraged. This Lemon part
represents only the second time I've attempted Lemon scenes (the other
being in "A Differant Path" on alt.startrek.creative) You have been warned.
Stephen
Part 11: Making Lemonade.
What has gone before:
Part 1: Akane meets Ranma at age 12. They spar. Akane walks in on Ranma
Part 2: Ryoga first appears. Ranma shows off in Gym class. Ranma is
challenged to teach the class gymnastics. Ranma walks in on Akane.
Part 3: Akane teaches the uneven bars. Sensei Ogawa has an agenda.
Nabiki takes a picture. Ranma walks in on Akane.
Part 4: Akane finds the picture. Akane and Ranma eat away from Nabiki
Ranma and Akane pull a joke on Nabiki that gets Akane a kiss. Ranma and
Akane talk in the bath.
Part 5: Ranma and Akane finish teaching gymnastics. The betrothal document
is found. Kasumi walks in on Ranma and Akane. Kasumi talks to Akane.
Part 6: Genma learns of Akane. Soun cries. Akane and Ranma walk on
fences. Nodoka appears.
Part 7: Nodoka plays sword master. Nabiki finds out what is planned for
her. Nabiki and Akane spar. Nodoka waits for Genma.
Part 8: Ranma has breakfast with his mother. Akane and Ranma talk about
his parents. Nabiki is teased during a lunch interrupted by Ryoga.
Ranma's move to the Tendos announced. Ranma finds out that Akane is ticklish.
Part 9: Ranma moves in. Kasumi talks with Nodoka. Soun evaluates Ranma.
Akane and Ranma fall asleep watching TV.
Part 10: Soun stops Genma from waking Ranma and Akane up. Ranma and Akane
engage in pillow fight. Ranma and Genma spar over pond. Soun decides to
reopen the Dojo. Nodoka talks Akane about sex.
Ranma had been sleeping rather soundly, until he was awakened by
eighty-five pounds of female flesh that bounded on to his bed. "Good
Morning, Ranma," Akane said.
"Morning, Akane," Ranma said, tossing off the covers. He'd kicked on his
boxers in the night, but Akane had already seen everything, so he wasn't
worried that she'd start screaming pervert because he had a hard on.
Akane moved to kiss Ranma, and he pulled her closer. His hands slipped
under her long t-shirt, raising it. Akane could feel his hard penis
pressed up against her vagina. After her talk with Ranma's mother, Akane
wanted to know what it felt like inside her, so she positioned herself so
it would enter her.
Suddenly their passion was cooled, as Kasumi's voice came from the
doorway. "Oh my!"
They pulled away from each other, embarrassed that they had been caught.
Akane pulled down her T-shirt. "We better get ready for school," she said,
exiting the room passed a shocked Kasumi.
"Right," Ranma said, closing the door.
Akane had almost finished putting on her school uniform when Kasumi
knocked on the door. Since she just had to tie the bow, and whoever it was
could help her with that, she said, "Come in."
"Akane, we need to talk," Kasumi said.
"What about," Akane said, turning around. "Could you tie my bow?"
"About what you and Ranma were doing this morning," Kasumi said, neatly
tying the bow. "It simply isn't proper."
"And what exactly isn't proper?" Akane asked, with a rather innocent
expression.
"You and Ranma shouldn't be getting so close," Kasumi replied.
"He's my fiancee," Akane replied, picking up her book bag. "I'm supposed
to be getting closer to him."
"Not that close," Kasumi said.
"Kasumi, sometimes you are just too traditional," Akane said, exiting her
room.
Ranma waited for his mother after school outside the Gym Office. He hoped
she wouldn't spend too much time talking with Sensei Ogawa. There she was,
finally. He'd heard his dad comment that his mom shouldn't be out working.
Dad had some strange ideas. Mom was good with her sword, and as Sensei
Ogawa said, it was the duty of an artist to pass on their talents.
"Mom, we need to talk," Ranma said.
"About what?" Nodoka asked.
"Me and Akane," Ranma said. "We're getting really close, and I want to
know how what the plan was."
"Well, it was your father's idea, but as I understand it, you are to be
married when you return from the training trip at age 16," Nodoka said.
"I'm not sure we'll be able to wait that long," Ranma replied.
"Oh, are you considering becoming a man, my son?" Nodoka said with a big
smile on her face.
"After this morning, I kinda think it won't be long until we, you know, do
it," Ranma said, looking from side to side to see if any one was listening
in. "And I'm kinda worried that Dad will take me away before I can do
anything to protect Akane in case something happened."
"That is very mature of you, my son," Nodoka replied.
"Well, I don't want anything to harm Akane," Ranma said. "I mean she's a
pretty good martial artist and everything..."
"I understand, Ranma," Nodoka said. "You love her." Ranma nodded. "Well,
I'll look into arranging an earlier marriage, though the ceremony will have
to be put off. You and Akane are a little young to get married, so I'll
have to find some loop hole."
"Just give the laws to Nabiki," Ranma said. "She's very good turning
agreements to suit her."
"Really," Nodoka said. "That's not exactly an honorable trait. I shall
have to speak to Soun about curbing that problem. Meanwhile, I think you
and I should go shopping for a ring."
Ranma was awake when Akane snuck into his room. Her figure was shown
rather nicely in the moonlight as she dropped her robe before climbing into
his bed. Her nude form snuggled up against his unclothed body. No words
had been exchanged to set this up, but both had known that it was going to
happen.
Akane had been wondering about how it would feel to have Ranma inside her
since his mother had given her the talk about the birds and the bees.
Nodoka had recommended that if she wanted to really know what it felt like,
she should do it with Ranma. She pulled him on top of her, feeling his
hard sex pressing against her lower stomach.
Ranma began to kiss Akane. Her smooth skin rubbing against him was
arousing him. As he moved against her, he felt Akane pushing him down. He
moved down so that his hard shaft was posed at Akane's entrance. With one
smooth stroke, their virginities surrendered to each other. Then they
began moving, Ranma thrusting to meet Akane's hips. Each move caused Akane
to moan softly with pleasure. Pleasure built until suddenly, Ranma thrust
deeply into his fiancee, and sent his seed deep inside her.
The feeling of his penis pulsing her body full of baby making liquid, was
too much for Akane. She climaxed, her vagina milking out every last drop
of Ranma's semen, her cry of pleasure loud.
The effort was too much for the couple, and they drifted off to sleep,
their sweaty bodies still joined under the tangled covers.
Before dawn the next morning, Akane sneaked out of Ranma's room,
preferring not to advertise her new status with Ranma. If she hadn't made
so much noise the previous night, nor more when she and Ranma had done it
again just minutes before, she might have succeeded. Instead, Nabiki stood
by the door.
"So, do you want to tell me what it felt like, or should I tell Dad that
Ranma has made his youngest daughter a woman?" Nabiki asked.
"You wouldn't?" Akane replied, walking a little gingerly towards her room.
"Akane, you know better than to ask that question," Nabiki said, pursuing
her sister.
Akane opened the door to her room, and gestured for Nabiki to enter before
her. "What do you want to know," Akane said. "And what ever I tell you
doesn't leave this room."
"Ah, you're no fun," Nabiki replied.
"I mean it," Akane said, sitting on her bed. "It could really ruin my
reputation. If I hear that anything I tell you gets out, it will mean both
me and Ranma 'train' you."
"Okay," Nabiki said, turning Akane's desk chair around and sitting in it,
propping her head up on it's back.
"Where to start..." Akane began.
Next Part: Opening Solutions
Two more parts to go.
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