Cool fic. There needs to be more slayers fanfiction done. This was
simple, short, and with nicely with the tone of the original series. The
characters seemed genuine enough. Of course, that's just assuming Gourry's
some sort of idiot savant.
One complaint though. Xelloss is supposed to be a good player, right?
How the heck can he have three holes in his defense? Even average players
don't usually leave that many open at a time.
Caine
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