Jason Liao wrote:

On Wed, 7 Jul 1999, Donny Cheng wrote:

<snip most of the C&C> 

      I gazed down at him.  He was not that far removed from the
pervert that watched X rated movies that none would believe me if I
were to claim he took advantage of me in his drunken stupor.

believe = disbelieve

This change doesn't really work because it would make the sentence
contradictory, unless you change 'that none would believe me' to 'that
(people/they) would disbelieve me'. Either way I suggest changing 'He
was not that far removed' to 'He was not so far removed'.

Chad Walker, cswvna@hotmail.com (main)
cswvna@mail.austasia.net (FFML / alternate)