My first draft, I'll admit, was horribly flawed and OCC. It was
unusual
seeing half of responses I received complaining about how OCC Ami
was,
and yet almost all of them encouraged me to go on.
Quick terminology lesson, folks, because I've noticed a lot of people
doing this lately:
It is OOC, not OCC. It stands for Out Of Character.
But if there's one thing I was grateful for- it was for you guys
knocking the sense into me about OCCness of Ami. So I went back to
the
writing board and rewrote almost the whole thing. This time should
prove
to be better than the previous version.
This is better how, precisely? Ami's characterization is still way
off. This isn't Ami, this is a thinly disguised Akane.
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o/~Sometimes I fart, sometimes I belch;
sometimes I scratch my nads...o/~
-The Eternal Lost Lurker
(the 666th Pokemon)
"Chikushou...omae wa...bakemono...."
"Bakemono? Che....ore wa akuma da,"
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