I agree.  This was a cool story.  I've always enjoyed flashbacks 
combined with present.  I also liked getting into the head of Sayoko.  I 
considered her to be a rather confusing character.  She seemed snobby and 
arrogant at the beach, but her reaction was much more innocent when Keiichi 
took the love potion.  I enjoy seeing bit players get starring roles.


Caine

Overall, very nice.  Probably not the most profound thing I've ever read,
as that honor goes to Lawson's Nuku Nuku series.  Of course, that also
messed me up for a week.

Having that party scene right after the first classroom scene made me
think that you were going to switch into the present after every memory
scene.  Besides that, I don't have too much more to say, other than I
liked how you handled this.


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