Hi,
Tom Clancy has made a LOT of $$ with Russia invading
Europe or Japane invading parts of the US. The fact
that you name the country does not, in it self, into
and anit- anything fanfic. If it's terrorists---say
so. There ARE home grown Japanese terrorists. And
plenty form OUT of Japan. Pick one, give them a
plausable reason to do what they are doing. Give them
an objective. Terrorists kill people for a reason.
They have an objective. Why Nerima. Why. Why. WHY. And
HOW. It's going to take a lot of manpower to take over
Nerima. And the Japanese have, in addition to the
JSDF, a very well trained riot police. Trained for
situations of terrorist attack. 
Name the invaders. Give their objective. 

--- Trakal <Trakal@map.com> wrote:

First thanks for the C&C. 

I've just started reading this. 
A few comments##. Why unknown soldiers? First of

all

there are plenty
of people in the Pacific Rim that HATE the

Japanese.

That's very true. But I didn't want to turn this
into an 
anti-this nation or anti-that country fic. I don't
want people 
going into this thinking "this author wrote this fic
because 
they hate the Koreans" or "this author wrote this
fic because 
they hate the Chinese" etc.

And there's something else. I called it an invasion,
but it was 
Nerima only, not all of Japan, that was invaded. So
its equally 
possible that the solders were, in fact, a Japanese
terrorist 
group or even the Yakuza.

However, I leave that up to the reader.

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