*I had no idea what to write as subject, I'm a newbie, gomen*

Gomen nasai, minna!  I forgot to put something in for my Slayers Fanfic. 
Sometimes I'm so forgetful and this truly is the first time I've ever had
anything posted on the Net.  Please tell me what you think, okay?  I
really want to know how I can improve what I write because I want to be a
writer as a hobby, but an actress as a full time.  So any input you have
is greatly appreciated!  Domo domo!  

MurasakiKaze
Muteki@juno.com
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