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From: David A. Tatum <desaix@sysnet.net>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Thursday, 01 July, 1999 23:05
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][Ranma] Three Souls, One Heart Chapter 13

"Fine," Akane said, blushing.  Ranma noticed Akane's eyes lose a little
focus.  "Yes, yes, good idea," she muttered and started searching {through

: for}

her mirror.

Akane nodded.  "We will have to explain our decision about not letting
everyone know of our {marraige : marriage} to your mother{, :} first, but

I certainly don't

have any problems with ending our day on a, er, pleasant note."

Nodoka tensed a bit as she heard the door opening.  She hoped it wasn't
Cologne and her charges coming back- she didn't want to have to explain
without having the Oni there to help protect her if {she : they} decided

to attack

suddenly.

Akane hesitated.  "Well... maybe it'll be a good idea to let everyone work
out {there : their} anger now.  Before the ceremony."

"Oh, yeah, that reminds me," Ranma began.  "Akane and I would like to keep
our {marraige : marriage} a secret for now....  We want there to be a

ceremony that you

and {pops : Pops} and Akane's family could all see and enjoy, but we're

afraid that

if {pops : Pops} and Mr. Tendou find out we're planning this ceremony

they'll ruin

it."