Hi.  
I really enjoyed this fic.  I must say, it took me a
bit by surprise; I was only going to skim it over, but
I found myself very interested and disappointed that
it ended so soon.  

Anyway, I'm eagerly waiting for the next installments.
 There are no negative comments that I can really
make--the only complaint I have is the explanations of
words (such as that tatami means a mat).  It makes
your sentences slightly confusing.  Oh, and I was
surprised that Akari didn't like the fact that Ryoga
turned into P-chan.  I mean, she loves pigs. 
Otherwise, great job!   Post up the next chapter soon.

K-chan
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There are two things I cannot stand: one is
intolerance, the other is hypocricy.
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