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----- Original Message -----
From: G.L. Sandborn <sandborn@microlink.net>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Wednesday, June 30, 1999 22:28
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma] Nabiki - New Horizons - Chapter 20: Memories

     "Kitty ran away and I went to find her," the girl said
before looking up at Nabiki. "And Na-bi-ki rescued {kitty : Kitty}."

I especially liked the sequence with Reiko and Miki.

     Shampoo looked between Akane's firm expression and Ranma's
look of resolve.  She glanced at Nodoka, still holding her sword
in a threatening manner.  The odds were not good.  She might be
able to dispatch Akane but only {at the cost : more cost than} she was

prepared to

pay.  Besides, between Ranma, who she knew could beat her, and
the lady with the sword, who looked like she was an expert, the
victory over Akane could very well be a Pyrrhic one.  She glanced
around for help but Cologne had disappeared along with the crazy
monk.  Alone and with no chance of winning the way she wanted,
she slowly climbed off her opponent.