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        //Maybe when that spider bit me,\\ he thought, 
//could it be...?\\
Curious, he stepped onto the roof, searching for something to test his
strength out on. Stumbling across a likely section of pipe, 
Gosunkugi picked
it up. It was a little longer than his forearm, and almost as thick.
Grabbing both ends, he bent the pipe into a U-shape easily.

	This is the only bit I have a problem with. :)  Would Gos _REALLY_
have jumped to that conclusion so quickly?  I doubt I would, had the same
thing occurred to me... although it's possible, I guess.


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        I would appreciate any and all comments on this. If 
anyone would
like to join up with me to build this into a decent fic, just 
let me know.

	I'd be happy to help, if you bear in mind that my knowledge of
Spiderman is just above squat. ;)  I'm reasonably familiar with the overall
concepts, it's just that details (Details, always details!) escape me.  My
limited knowledge stems from a few Saturday morning cartoons and nothing
else.

        Thanks!

Jed

	I like this idea.  If I can help, even if it's only to preread, let
me know!

	Brian Payne
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